Type Of Story: 1D
Author: BritishPolaroids
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 124
Votes: 34
Comments: 3
Description:
❝Don't say okay like that, this is not The Fault In Our Stars.❞ BritishPolaroids {Regan} 2014 All Rights Reserved.
*Editing*
Suggested If: you like short, already completed fanfics
My Review: I like the plot. It's cute. A little too fast maybe, but cute. Normally I'd prefer longer chapters, but I think the chapter lengths actually work for this story. Your grammar and spelling is okay, though it could use some work in areas such as the mixup of your/you're and there/their/they're. There were also some places where some words seemed to be missing so I'd go back and edit that too. Overall, the story wasn't that extravagant, but it was decent and I liked it (: oh, and I liked the summary too xD
Note to Author: Do you type on your phone or some other device that uses autocorrect? I thought I saw some mistakes that could be autocorrect related, but I could be wrong
Rating (1-5): 3
Other Notes: the other thing that I'd maybe consider fixing is the flow from one chapter to another. It wasn't that bad, but it was a bit choppy
