Type Of Story: 1D
Author: dflorke01
Story Rating: Not Rated
Reads: 4,882
Votes: 199
Comments: 37
Description:
"There's no shame in being afraid. Hell, we're all afraid. What you gotta do is figure out what you're afraid of because when you put a face on it, you can beat it. Better yet, you can use it
That's what Liam Payne learns when he meets Zayn Malik. Action and fluff no smut
Original idea from livinginstyles
Suggested If: you like vampire fics
My Review: The plot is extremely cliché and honestly reminds me of a gay wannabe version of Twilight. It also goes by WAY too fast-like, Liam and Zayn are already kissing in chapter two. I love Ziam so I like the fact that it's a Ziam fic, but the Nourry kind of...concerns me. I mean, unless they're polygamists, it's not natural to have more than one boyfriend at once, with the other person's consent. Your spelling and grammar could definitely use some work and I think you need to fix the choppiness and speed of the plot a lot. Overall...next time try to better develop the plot.
Note to Author: I think BTR was in the story too, weren't they? That was extremely random
Rating (1-5): 1.5
Other Notes: If anything else, I'd try to make the chapters just a tad longer
