Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: EverySinnerHasAAngel
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 605
Votes: 29
Comments: 31
Description:
Just read the book it would be a lot easier.
Suggested If: You like fics where the boys are famous.
My Review: The plot line is extremely cliche and I'm a little confused as to if one of the boys is the girl's brother (because of the title) or if she's Paul's niece so I'm hoping you'll explain that. However, this is pretty explainable because no 12 year old is going to write the best fanfic and it's only your first story. Your grammar and spelling needs a lot of work, but you seem to know the correct usage of there/they're/their which amazes me because a lot of people mix it up.
Note To Author: DON'T use text talk when you write (so DON'T use stuff like u instead of you).
Rating (1-5): 1.5
Other Notes: I'd edit your chapters a lot.
