Type Of Story: 1D
Author: adorablouis
Story Rating: R
Reads: 25
Votes: 4
Comments: 1
Description:
Harry's catering Zayn's 21st birthday party. There's lots of alcohol, and lots of tongue.
Suggested If: you ship Zarry and like smut
My Review: The plot is simple, but I like it. And after reading a Niall fanfic that was 70 chapters of no smut, it was a nice change xD even if I don't ship Zarry (I've been turned off of Zarry after I found a fucking Zarry/Lux fanfic omg. I still have nightmares). It's a pretty good length for a one shot and the grammar and spelling was pretty decent, but there were a few things I'd go back and change. A few typos and then just a forgotten apostrophe and a mixup of they're/their. Overall though, I enjoyed this one shot (like the dirty minded hoe I am) and the ending was cute.
Note to Author: Me gusta mucho xD
Rating (1-5): 5
Other Notes: Is this your second 5/5 one shot that I've reviewed? I think it is lol
