Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: Mavanna4Life
Story Rating: No Rating
Description:
I look up from my desk.
Marcel and Y/N you'll be chemistry partners this year. Wow shes one of the prettiest girls in this school. I've always liked her, and now we're partners I dont know if I'll make it. What am i saying no one likes Marcel. But for her. Im willing to try anything.. Marcel! Marcel. I look up seeing her staring into my eyes. She giggles. Boy is she beautiful
For all you directioners. We finally made a Y/N or your name story. Yes we know how annoying it can be reading about some girl nothing like you with your celebrity crush. Sooo here's to One Direction.
If any suggestions to more Y/N inbox us
Suggested If: You like fanfics where the main character is yourself (Y/N fanfics)
My Review: I like the idea of a Y/N fic because, besides imagines, I have never seen a fanfic like that before. Let alone a full length fanfic. Eighteen chapters is a pretty good length and it shows that you want to actually complete the fic. However, I found the chapters extremely hard to read. They were hard to read because the author(s) did not use quotation marks when people were speaking and the different POVs were easy to mix up.
Note To Author: Again, I like the idea of a Y/N fanfic; however, I feel you need to go back and edit the chapters. It would be much easier to read AND would probably attract a lot more readers if you fixed the dialogue and the POV mixups.
Rating (1-5): 2
Other Notes: I've noticed that there seem to be two authors writing the story? So maybe if one could write the chapters and the other could go through and edit the chapters, making sure to fix the dialogue and POVs and all that, it would really help a lot (:
