Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: EatReadWriteRepeat (your name literally describes my life)
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 56,208
Votes: 4,437
Comments: 4,577
Description:
"A person often meets his destiny on the road he took to avoid it."
Anitza "Anissa" V. left Italy to escape her world of money, status, lies and betrayal, to travel. When she meets Harry Styles, Jr. CEO of Styles INC. in Los Angeles she is brought right back into the world she left behind.
Suggested If: You like fics where the girl and Harry have a sort of love/hate relationship
My Review: The plot is really weird to describe. It's like...cliche, but the things that lead up to the cliche moments are unique. Like Anissa just bumping into Harry, the coma, etc. Those moments are pretty cliche, but it's the things that lead UP to those moments that're unique. I like your varying chapter lengths and as for your grammar and spelling, I'd give it about a 50/50. You're good with most things, but you mix up your/you're, there/they're/their and to/too a lot. I've explained the differences to these a LOT before so I'd look at some of my other reviews-a lot of them have explanations-or use Google to help. Overall though, I'd say this is definitely a story that gets better as you read.
Note To Author: The story isn't the best, but it's definitely impressive for a first fanfic
Rating (1-5): 3.5
Other Notes: Is it bad that I ship Anissa with Mariano more than I ship her with Harry? xD
