Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: Chezthebest
Story Rating: No Rating
Reads: 4,414
Votes: 137
Comments: 27
Description:
Being Paul Higgins daughter isn't fun and games. I don't go partying with One Direction. I don't do anything I'm 15 turning 16 very soon. I hate those boys. They took my dad, and I think their snobby. Everytime my dad does visit me he's to tired to do anything. He's their body guard so he watches them. My father one day told me I he would spend the whole summer with me but I never thought I would have to spend my precious summer touring with the twats. My name is Chesney Marie Higgins and life can just be plain cruel.
My second story please bare with me. And please read my first story.
(She will be loved) I'm working on that also.
Suggested If: you like fanfics where the boys are famous and the girl has family connections
My Review: The plot is still cliche, but I do actually like this fanfic a bit more than the first one. Maybe it's because I've never read one of the "Paul Higgins' daughter" fics? Idk. Your grammar and spelling still needs some work, but not as much as your first fanfic. It's still not the best story in the world, but you're definitely improving (:
Note To Author: Like I said, you're improving so try and complete this story too and keep it up (:
Rating (1-5): 3
Other Notes: I don't know if the character contest is over, but I submitted a character anyway :P
Thank you for your follow! (:
