Type Of Story: 5SOS
Author: dauntlessluke
Story Rating: Not Rated
Reads: 2,646
Votes: 58
Comments: 74
Description:
"we all need to be saved, even if we are being saved by another person or by ourselves."
© all rights reserved, kat 2014-2015
Suggested If: you like Luke fics
My Review: There's not much to judge on yet when it comes to the plot because there are only 4 chapters, but so far the story seems really cool. I already like Kiera's character, though I do find the whole abusive dad thing kind of cliche and I would think that if Niall AND his mom knew about Kiera's dad, they would do something about it. Your chapter lengths are okay and, for someone who types on their phone, your grammar and spelling is actually pretty decent. Overall, I really like the story so far!
Note to Author: Continue!
Rating (1-5): 4
Other Notes: World History was gross. Now I'm in APUSH xD
