Type Of Story: 1D
Author: gymnasliam
Story Rating: Not Rated
Reads: 228,621 (#LifeGoals)
Votes: 12,068
Comments: 8,176
Description: [COMPLETED]
She used to be overweight, on the verge of diabetes, and she knew it too. What made her change her snacking habits and lazy ways, was none other than her terribly cheeky yet extremely attractive Coach Liam Payne.
The only problem, she couldn't help but eventually fall for him.
/ Copyright 2014: All rights reserved to gymnasliam
[from june 2014 to february 2015]
Suggested If: you like fics where the main character isn't a perfect Barbie doll
My Review: I love the plot and I especially love how funny and sarcastic Jo's character is xD the plot goes at a pretty good pace, though I do think the ending is a little rushed. But overall, for 40 chapters, it's pretty good. Your spelling and grammar is pretty good too, though it could use a little bit of work. Mainly the capitalization of I, I'm, etc. and a few your/you're mixups is a all I noticed. I love the varying chapter lengths too. Overall, I definitely enjoyed this fanfic!
Note to Author: Sorry this review took so long to get out. Life's a bitch sometimes
Rating (1-5): 4
Other Notes: I'm currently sneaking this review while we have a sub in Honors English and I SHOULD be reading and annotating The Raven so here's to hoping I don't get caught xD
