Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: Brekitten1234
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 1,068
Votes: 34
Comments: 7
Description:
This story is gonna be different then the other ones I make.
_ Dear Harry,
If you are reading this then that means that I am in a better place now. Thank you for being there for me and take care of baby Kat. I love you and Kat so much
Love,
Sarah
Suggested If: You like fanfics where there's a little bit of romance, but it's mostly family based
My Review: I like the plotline itself (I like to see plots different from the two main characters just making out all the time) and I think the family-based storyline is appealing. However, I think your grammar/spelling needs work (especially your grammar). Just things like then/than, sense/since/cents, your/you're, there/their/they're, etc. Also, always remember to create new paragraphs whenever a new/different character is speaking!
Note To Author: I think you should definitely update some more and just keep the things that I said above in mind!
Rating (1-5): I'm going to split this fanfic into two ratings. One for plotline and one for spelling/grammar:
Plotline: 3.5-4
Spelling/Grammar: 2.5
Other Notes: If anything else, I would also try to make the chapters a little longer. I think it only took me like ten minutes (maybe even less) to read the entire thing xD
Thank you for your follow (:
