Fanfic Review: ☼Flower☼

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Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic

Author: WoodlandPines

Story Rating: PG

Reads: 27 (it says 13, but I read every chapter so)

Votes: 14

Comments: 1 (mwah)

Description:

Finley works at a flower shop.

Harry sings on stage.

Finley never had a boyfriend.

Harry hates his girlfriend.

Finley is head over heels for Harry.

Harry feels the same.

Suggested If: You like cute, fluffy fics with short, easy to read chapters.

My Review: Well the plot is a tad bit fast and I don't think it makes sense how Harry is famous, but can just walk on in to a flower shop with nobody fangirling over him, but I do like the overall plot. It's cute, fluffy, and simple and isn't really over the top. You spelling and grammar is really good (I think I spotted just one, maybe two mistakes) and normally I would suggest longer chapters, but I actually like your writing style. It's pretty unique (: and though it's your first story it's a lot better than some others out there.

Note To Author: Keep writing!

Rating (1-5): 4

Other Notes: This story definitely deserves more reads!

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