Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: WoodlandPines
Story Rating: PG
Reads: 27 (it says 13, but I read every chapter so)
Votes: 14
Comments: 1 (mwah)
Description:
Finley works at a flower shop.
Harry sings on stage.
Finley never had a boyfriend.
Harry hates his girlfriend.
Finley is head over heels for Harry.
Harry feels the same.
Suggested If: You like cute, fluffy fics with short, easy to read chapters.
My Review: Well the plot is a tad bit fast and I don't think it makes sense how Harry is famous, but can just walk on in to a flower shop with nobody fangirling over him, but I do like the overall plot. It's cute, fluffy, and simple and isn't really over the top. You spelling and grammar is really good (I think I spotted just one, maybe two mistakes) and normally I would suggest longer chapters, but I actually like your writing style. It's pretty unique (: and though it's your first story it's a lot better than some others out there.
Note To Author: Keep writing!
Rating (1-5): 4
Other Notes: This story definitely deserves more reads!
