Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: eulieboo2001
Story Rating: PG-13
Reads: 532
Votes: 55
Comments: 14
Description:
See the Great story of Eula warwick! I will update as much as I can when I'm not doing homework or school work and I'm not babysitting
Suggested If: you like fics where the boys are famous
My Review: The plot is extremely cliche, HOWEVER I know that it's your first fanfic so of course the plot isn't gonna be the best. My first fanfic wasn't so great either xD but I do like all of your varying chapter lengths, it's always good to have a variety. Your spelling and grammar needs a LOT of work, in fact there were some moments where I couldn't tell what was happening because the spelling and grammar was so bad. If I were you I'd stay away from typing the chapters up on your phone because it's a bitch and autocorrect is a cunt. Overall it's definitely not the greatest fanfic ever but I'd keep practicing (:
Note to Author: every author needs to keep practicing and improving! Hell, I have over 50 fanfics and I still find issues that I need to work on!
Rating (1-5): 1.5
Other Notes: I suggest a rewrite
