Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic
Author: volcanoharry
Story Rating: R
Reads: 88,045
Votes: 4,980
Comments: 2,328
Description:
In the mid-90s, satanism was very popular among teenagers.
They were influenced by satanic movies and music about killing and torturing; songs about raping young virgins to get immortality, and movies about eating human hearts to become a disciple of Satan.
Most of the teens were just searching for something different, something that could make their heart skip a beat or two, most of them being misfits.
And, in the mid-90s Harry was just a misfit teenager looking for a rush, and already inspired by the occult, the music he had listened to and the movies he had watched, he became the Satanic.
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8Tracks: /volcanoharry/harryisguilty
© volcanoharry
Horror #10 / Short Story #21 / Fanfiction #263
(harry styles au)
Suggested If: You like fics that are VERY dark
My Review: I am absolutely in love with the plot and let me say a giant Fuck You to whoever gives you hate for it. It's extremely unique and, thoug. I wish it went at a sort of slower pace, I absolutely love it. Your grammar and spelling is really good too, with maaaaybe just a little bit of work that could be edited. Here are the three major things that I noticed in case you want to fix it at all:
1) Author's notes. Putting an author note in the middle of the story takes a reader out of the atmosphere of the story. I'd save any A/Ns for the beginning or end of a chapter.
2) Not italicizing a person's thoughts. It kinda made some things hard to read and I had to go back and read the thoughts in normal text a few times.
3) Separating dialogue. You're pretty good for the most part, but there were some parts where you forgot to create a new paragraph when a new/different character was speaking.
Overall though, I absolutely love this story and you're a pretty good writer minus those few flaws. I'm definitely going to keep up with this story (:
Note To Author: Consider yourself followed!
Rating (1-5): Error: the rating scale is incapable of going that high
Other Notes: May I give this story a shoutout? I know that you have over 4K followers and compared to that my 715 is nothing, but I definitely want more people to check this story out.
