Fanfic Review: Confusion~Muke

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(My internet connection is being an ass so I hope this shit saves)

Type Of Story: 5SOS

Author: RippedFlannel

Story Rating: PG-13

Reads: 4,147

Votes: 306

Comments: 76

Description:

Sequel To /Bye~Muke\

Suggested If: you ship Muke

My Review: I definitely prefer the first book over the second, but I still like the plot and I especially like the cliffhanger that you ended the story with. I like your style with the shorter chapters, but I feel like I need to bitch a little more at the grammar since the chapters aren't made up of texts this time. Mainly it's not capitalizing things (like, it's I instead of i) and not using apostrophes (I'm instead of im) that you need to work with. Overall, I don't think it's as good as the first book (honestly, are sequels EVER as good?) but I still enjoyed it c:

Note to Author: Mikey needs to get his shit together

Rating (1-5): 3.5

Other Notes: Off to read the third book c:

Note to Readers: I already revirwed the first book, should be the review right before this one. Check it out c:

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