Fanfic Review: Leather Jacket [Zayn Malik]

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Type Of Story: 1D

Author: PaynefulEcstasy

Story Rating: PG-13

Reads: 2,440

Votes: 132

Comments: 62

Description:

*Slow Updates*

❝She's bitter, rude, and I can't stand her.❞

❝But yet, you seem to have found yourself attracted to her, Zayn.❞

Sonya doesn't care whatsoever about the boy band her friend is best mates with. Their music isn't her taste. When her friend finally convinces her to go to one of their concerts, she meets them and meets one boy that seems to have a huge affect on her.

©PaynefulEcstasy

Suggested If: you like fics that're very descriptive and seem to almost suck you in

My Review: There's no denying that the plot is pretty cliche and goes by pretty fast, but there's something about it that I like...I don't even know what it is, but I think it's pretty much what I said above. The story is very descriptI've and, even though they're not the most realistic characters in the world, there's something about how you've developed your characters that I love. your grammar and spelling is pretty damn good, there was just a small handful of typos I noticed that I wouldn't worry about too much and I like all the different chapters. Overall, I was pleasantly surprised with this fic.

Note to Author: I'd try to adjust the plot to add a few unique elements of your own (because I gurantee you could find thousands of other fanfics with the "girl hates the band, she and the guy are at each other's throats, but fall in love anyway" plotline) but I'd definitely update!

Rating (1-5): 3.5

Other Notes: Definitely not a 5 star fanfic, but I'd check this story out x

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