Fanfic Review: Dreamscope [h.s.]

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Type Of Story: 1D Fanfic

Author: wildflowers1d

Story Rating: PG-13

Reads: 28,884

Votes: 1,676

Comments: 861

Description:

(Harry Styles AU) Nya lives in a world where romantic relationships are established by the government and even her dreams are controlled. When she begins to have dreams of a green-eyed boy who repeatedly gives her the same warning, she's lead down a path that will make her question everything.

/ cover by kissingluke_

Suggested If: you like long Harry fics

My Review: I am absolutely in love with the plot omfg. At first I thought it was going a little fast, but I honestly think the speed of the plot is perfect now. I love all the detail you've put into everything and it almost feels like Nya is a real person. I like your chapter lengths, they're kinda short, but extremely detailed and your grammar and spelling is pretty much perfect. Really the only problems I have with the story is that some of the chapters end kinda abruptly and I almost think you could've ended the first book after chapter 56 and started the sequel from there, but the chapter thing is extremely minor and hey, I don't know what you're planning for the rest of the story so just keep doing what you're doing c:

Note to Author: would you mind sending me the link to Dreamscope's trailer? I'd love to watch it!

Rating (1-5): 10,000,000

Other Notes: GO READ THIS NOW

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