Type Of Story: 1D/5SOS (mostly 1D) Fanfic
Author: tayislukespenguin96
Story Rating: PG-13 (it should be R because of the sex scenes)
Reads: 1,002
Votes: 97
Comments: 8
Description:
Nina wanted to get away from her abusive boyfriend she tried and tried again until she fell into the arms of her safe haven . She moved to another country and falls in love with a punk boy who looks bad on the outside but sweet in reality but maybe she's falling for the person who is gonna safe her in the end does contain sexual content. 2013 CopyRight
Suggested If: You like break up/make up type stories
My Review: The plot is overall pretty cliche, but I do like how you managed to put both 1D AND 5SOS in the story (although...where's Michael?). Your grammar and spelling isn't the worst in the world, though it could use some touching up. Your biggest issues are mixups of your/you're (your=shows possession, you're=you are something) and to/too (to=going to do something, too=same thing as 'also') and comma placement (I don't know how to help with this, it's just something you get better with with practice). However, you're so far along in the story, I would finish it.
Note To Author: Finishing it would make good practice (:
Rating (1-5): 1.5 maybe 2
Other Notes: Edit!
