Sins of Our Fathers [Complete]--Editing

Chapter 1

Hey guys it's the big KC. I'm anew writer and im not that good, thank you for reading my story thus far. Please comment on anything I can fix, I welcome criticism. Thank you!;)

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It took a lomg time for the humans to forget their sin. But it was

Indeed forgotten and the sins of their fathers prospered and lived amongst them.

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They crowded the court yard like an army of ants;pressed closely together. Today was the day that the Dominion would choose the heir to his throne.

The audience was restless, for this year they had multiplied by the thousands; all of them gathered in the open square of the building of judgement.

Men, women, children; they were all part of this separate world of, what the humans called, the kingdom of snakes. The Vampires.

They were at the top and the humans were at the bottom. This is how it always was, and how it always would be.

Every 1,000 years the Dominion, a close descendent of the original seven, would address a multitude such as this on the matter of, who would be the new Dominion or Domina.

Since the beginning, there had always been a successor to the throne of the snake-men kingdom.

Until today.

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I know this was a short chapter, but it was only ment to set the scene , don't worry we will get to the romance and action really soon.

But If you can tell me what direction I'm going with this snake men thing I'll dedicate my story to you and BC your book on two chapters. Please vote!