I wanna do something different with my writing. I don't want to stray too far from fanfiction though. Would y'all read a book where Chres is a vampire or no?
I would definitely continue these stories, I just like the idea of doing something new.
Comment, vote, and share. (Please, I was looking at the stats of my stories, and this one went down a lot.)
So give me some suggestions I could use to improve if you have any. Longer chapter, shorter chapters, more drama, etc.
Enjoy!
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"Um...I would like that. But I do need to speak with Melanie first. I mean, she's about to have the babies, and I wanna make sure we'll be able to do this. I don't want to fail you, and I'm just now feeling like myself." I answer.
"Of course, I'm retiring in two weeks. I just need to know before my retirement party. Shay said she invited you."
"She did. Melanie and I will be there with the kids. I'll talk to her today to try and get a firm answer." I promise.
"Alright. That was really it. I just thought it needed to be talked about in person."
"Okay, I'll let you know soon."
I leave after a few more minutes" picking up breakfast for my babies. They're all probably asleep.
I get some Burger King for my babies.
"Welcome to Burger King. What an I get for you today?"
"I need an order of French toast sticks, actually, make that four. Four of the King Croissan'wiches with Sausage & Bacon. Two of the pancake and sausage platters and two of the Ultimate Breakfast platters." I say, looking over the menu to make sure I got everything I needed.
"Alright, anything else for you?"
"Two chocolate milks, a large strawberry banana smoothie, and a large lemonade." I add.
"Alright, is everything on your screen correct?" She asks.
I make sure it is. "Yes, ma'am."
"Alright, please pull forward for your total." She says.
I do as told, and pay for my food at the window.
She tries to make conversation after giving me my change, receipt, and drinks.
"Do you have a girlfriend?" She asks.
"No." I look up at her.
"Well, maybe-"
I cut her off, "I'm married with four kids."
She looks around, "Did you need any ketchup?"
"No thank you." I shake my head. She closes the window.
My phone rings, and I quickly get it from my pocket. "Hey."
"Hi, babe." Melanie says.
"What's wrong?"
"Nothing. My stomach hurts a little."
"I'm on my way home now. I'm at Burger King waiting for the food." I promise. "What kind of hurt?"
"Just them kicking and stretching out." She yawns.
"I'll run your belly when I get home." I assure her.
"Okay." She smiles. "I love you. Be careful."
"I love you too, mama. Tell my babies I love them." I say, noticing my bags being placed into a bigger bag.
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Under The Bridge(Chresanto August)
Fiksi PenggemarSixteen year old, Chresanto August, is all alone on the streets of Baltimore, Maryland. He left home, fed up with his parents behavior. When leaving, he only brought what he could fit in a book bag. A few pairs of clothes, a small blanket and the ne...