1: The Beginning [REVISED]

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Author's Note: I wrote this story when I was thirteen, fourteen-ish. I'm twenty-five now. This current copy of the story is mildly edited, but I will be making a Remastered 2022 version, that is much more updated.

Naruto was nowhere near the ending when I created this, so many of the events in here skew after a certain point and change from Naruto's timeline. This story is old, I salvaged it from my Quizilla account, XXXVioletEyesXXX, and as you all know Quizilla shut down about two years ago. Anyways, I hope you enjoy the story! Also, I apologize for any spelling errors or improper pronouns or any type of error you see in my writing. 

Since I was fairly young and new to writing when I started this story, and my experience with writing wasn't so perfect back then, I made a lot of errors and judgement calls like toxic ideology that I now have to go back to fix. It's under editing right now, but it is still readable. Just a few goofy slipups (along with scenes I'm mortified about now, hahaha) here and there. Thank you for reading this story! Much appreciated!

This is not a sequel and has no relation to the story Not So Different, it just has similar main character information.
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I landed on a tree branch, adverting my gaze to the village that would be my home in just a few hours. My timid green eyes scanned the village. I sat down on the branch and sighed. swinging my legs back and forth slowly.

To be truthful, I hated my life right now. Everything sucked. I was on my own, and I had to move to this new stinking village.

Great.

I was the last survivor out of my clan, the Mayuko clan. At just eight years old, I watched as my family was slaughtered right before my eyes. None of my siblings made it. Elretta, my eldest sister and eldest in the family, Daisuke, the oldest boy in the family, Tanji, the second eldest girl, and my twin brother, Michelangelo. 

My clan was well-known among the ninja world. Call it a morbid coincidence, but we were as strong as the Uchiha clan, another clan wiped out by massacre. There were only two survivors left.  I also heard they lived in this village. 

Well, anyways, my clan originated from Konohagakure, but we moved to Hoshigakure, the Village Hidden in the Stars. I had never actually seen Konohagakure, but I knew that my parents spent a few of their younger years there. Hoshigakure wasn't a well-known village, really. Most people had no idea it even existed, but it was my home, and I loved it more than I could ever love this new village, but alas, I had to move on, I could no longer bear being inside the village of my fallen family. In my mind, it was always going to be remembered as the place where I watched them die. 

I sighed, realizing how much time I had spent stalling, sitting here in deep thought. There was no use just sitting here. I'd have to go sooner or later, and I'd prefer before sundown. 

I stood up, jumping towards the entrance, landing with grace on one knee, and walked through the village gates and to the Hokage's building. I sighed, preparing myself mentally before opening the door to his office, ready to turn a new leaf. I walked in towards the elderly man who sat at the desk at the other side of the room, a walk that seemed to take hours. He looked up from his stacks of papers when I got closer to his desk. 

"Hello. What can I do for you?" he asked.

"I'm Fubuki Mayuko, I come from the Village Hidden in the Stars. May I stay here and be assigned to a team?" I asked.

His eyes widened in surprise.

"A Mayuko?!"He questioned.

I nodded with a small wince. "I was the only survivor."

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