Cliché, Cliché Everywhere

Possesive

"MINE!" Xavier the bad boy who does actual workout in the first chapter and then forgets all about it , plus the guy who doesn't wears pants growled as he held down blue pineapple who bitched about being ugly in the first chapter while being played by Marilyn Monroe in the cast section.

Somewhere Marilyn is having a stroke.

Okay ace!

You can not just go around and proclaim people as yours. I mean that's not how it works. Like, I don't go to a teacher's office,pin my hand on the golden sticker packet and hiss "Mine!"

That's not how it works. You gotta do good stuff to get a sticker.

Swatting Wattpad authors with newspaper.

Violence is indeed never an answer but im forced to hit people with random  objects because they make me so salty!

I'm sorry, you cannot own people and the word "mine" with minty breath, hunky body that you stole from Google images or abs you drew with your mom's eye pencil. The piercing orbs you got from aliens at area 51 and the hair that is messy like your country's economy isn't  gonna help you to get the girl.

Seriously....
I love possessive fics but when a guy is limited to these traits,then I'm bummed.
That's why being your very own judgemental ass Asian sistah who is secretly hiding under your bed and going through your Google search history, I hereby feel like differentiating between the "possessive" and "controlling" trope.
The latter ain't cute and is a form of abuse.

Blue pineapple: I'm going out to hangout with my friends! See ya latter! :-):-):-):-)

Xavier:
Will there be guys with you? If yes then I don't think that you should go! You should stay with me cuz I'm bored and even if I'm not planning to give you any time I don't understand why you'd still wanna go and hang out with your friends! Don't you love me? Tell me their names, contact numbers, email addresses and phone addresses! I need to know everything! And before going out! Send a picture of your self too. I know that you're always looking for ways to cheat on me and I don't want you hanging out with anyone with scraps you call clothes! In all I want to know when you'll be going and when you're gonna head home! I want to have the exact information, since chances are if you're unable to return on time, you've already opened your legs for someone else! TELL ME THE LOCATION AND EVERYTHING! what will you be wearing and who'll be doing your pick and drop?
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.... I'm not exaggerating here, I actually read a similar paragraph here at Wattpad in some story. I'm not against the idea of a guy  concerned about his girl but don't you think such a reaction is extreme? I mean c'mon! Let her live her life too.

Here is another example.

Blue pineapple: I'm going out to hangout with my friends! :-):-):-):-):-)

Xavier:
Okay, take care of yourself and don't leave your phone on silent. If anything goes wrong ring me up,I'll come and get you. I trust you with your body and decisions. Have fun!

....I find this one cuter, that the guy is actually concerned and trusting towards his lover and had granted his gurl with freedom. By the text we can tell that he can be posseive but never controlling.

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Both of the elements, if done well can make the story wonderful. But if either one of them loses their balance, they become capable of ruining a story.

Personally im not that happy with this chappie, since it feels too not-like-lizzy.
Sincere apologies if you think the same way too.