Torn Between Reality - Zerrie (Completed)

Question!

Does this sound like it would make a good story-line? I'm putting so much mind, effort and time in this new story I plan on publishing, so I need to know if it sounds good. Pleaseeeee tell meee.

                                                     -Thinspiration-

They say that body image is important, and that it has more value than health.

Thinspiration is when you're inspired to be thin, and inspired to stay thin, too. It's just like if you were a body builder; you would set a goal to stay overly buff. Same if you were a vegan; you would set a goal to avoid all meats.

My name's Ashton, and I've been inspired to stay thin. This is my story.

hemmo_dancer Bella_Higgin -writteninink- Flower__Crowns Gigi_washere ShawnieXlove endless_chaos_ BreaunaMarshall shamae2416 Tell me your thoughts!! :) xx