Highest Achievement - #7 in poetry [Oct 3, 2016]
~Nostalgia~
It's delicate, but potent.
The pain from an old wound.
A twinge in your heart..
Far more powerful than memory alone
A feeling of a place
Where we...
Ache
To
Go
Again.
-My thoughts. My word...
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Oh baby I know I'm not flawless But I self-destruct, while you? You go around and make a mess Then you think you are so true
Oh you think that breaking vow Is such ordinary harmless thing But it makes you fall really low Think of victim, pain you bring
'N' my sins will never be enough To equal all your bad wrong acts I do wrong with personal stuff You exploit humanity, hide facts
Keep increasing the circle of sin And then hide your hideous face Oh I stay away from your dustbin That you adorn fakely with lace
My sins have a very little scope And I so try my best to improve While you be stubborn and dope And you don't want me to prove
You think I give moral lectures And you find them really useless For my words give you fractures And you hate this guilt 'n' stress
May God forbid me for His rights That I neglect and not try to find But He'll forgive us for His rights But shall not forgive rights of... . . . MANKIND
Author's Note
This poem has been written because I wanted to share my concept of sin. I think that if we do not perform prayers or listen to songs etc or if we neglect rights of God..we only hurt ourselves. God is kind. He has the honor to forgive our negligence towards His rights. But if we do wrong with mankind, it increases our scope of sin because we hurt others too. And negligence towards such rights is what God will not forgive until the victim himself allows lending the forgiveness. No one is flawless and everyone needs to improve but we can always try to reduce the scope of our sins. I hope you got my opinion. :')♥♡ Do comment yours. :)
