Highest Achievement - #7 in poetry [Oct 3, 2016]
~Nostalgia~
It's delicate, but potent.
The pain from an old wound.
A twinge in your heart..
Far more powerful than memory alone
A feeling of a place
Where we...
Ache
To
Go
Again.
-My thoughts. My word...
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i recall the dense fog of my confused life and i recall that you were blinking your headlights to make me move as i was in your way but i was stuck so you knocked me all the way down and crushed me under the weight of your presence in that dense fog of my confused life
i recall lying there on the cold concrete with a blanket of cold, oh very cold fog and i swear that i'd never been so cold in that dense fog of my confused life as i was that day while i lay there on the cold concrete with a blanket of cold, oh very cold fog
i recall that i was sick deep inside my soul for i couldn't erase the image of you blinkin' your indicators those yellow ones as you retreated back to the safety of your crystal clear highways and drove away from that cold dense fog of my confused life
i recall the faded trail of your strong tyres right beside me on the cold concrete and i recall the image of your red tail lights that my eyes lost as soon as you were not in sight anymore and not to be found somewhere, anywhere, in that dense fog of my confused life
i recall that i was cold and i missed your horn and your swift drifts and your lush interior covered by an exterior ever so glossy black and i missed you as my engine coughed its last breath 'n' left me irrepairable in the dense fog of my confused life
Author's Note
Another metaphorical poem. I hope you get what it means. Do tell me as well. :D
How was it? =) Should I do more metaphorical poems or not?