Highest Achievement - #7 in poetry [Oct 3, 2016]
~Nostalgia~
It's delicate, but potent.
The pain from an old wound.
A twinge in your heart..
Far more powerful than memory alone
A feeling of a place
Where we...
Ache
To
Go
Again.
-My thoughts. My word...
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darling you're miles away and your absence hits me like a gunshot right through my withering heart for i can't stay apart anymore...
so would you please come to my rescue from rippin' loneliness that's encaging me moment by moment and show me a way for my prison break?
Authors's Note
Short and not upto my standard. It was just a random thought and maybe, I just wanted to publish it in the raw state without adding up to it or editing it so I gave it a go. I know it's not good. But it's original. This is how my bad poems are without editing and revision. :P I'm sorry for making you go through it. I'll not do it again. :x
However, have you noticed that in this poem, beloved's absence is a gunshot so basically, the lover is a victim of an indirect murder. Right? Then how come, she's the one in the prison? Well, the answer is, "this is what love does to you.." :')
