Highest Achievement - #7 in poetry [Oct 3, 2016]
~Nostalgia~
It's delicate, but potent.
The pain from an old wound.
A twinge in your heart..
Far more powerful than memory alone
A feeling of a place
Where we...
Ache
To
Go
Again.
-My thoughts. My word...
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you're in my line of sight with the vintage music's echo ringing in the background 'n' i sense, you're a canceled stamp but i'm a big timer, blue serge so let me take you to the jazz age with a fag between my lips and a bottle of moonshine hidden in the Struggle Buggy of my swanky red flivver that'll make you forget all those ten cent boxes spanning the streets at night under the shady neon light
come, i'll take you for a ride around the Tin Pan Alley and we'll ankle on the street even if we'll be on the lam and i'll make you feel unreal because you deserve to be anything but this blooey
ha! you thought i'm zozzled but i see right through you and i carry a torch for you despite of all that i see because you were a live wire and a killjoy stole your smile which i ought to return back even if i sound like a weasel so how about sharing a joe when sun's about to kiss us on the couch in my lounge in front of a rough TV static while you smile leisurely when i say 'cash or check?' because i sound splifficated but my voice is still copacetic for this is what love does to us this is what love does to us
when java holds the effect that of magical giggle water and i swear, i didn't drink but i feel like i'm all ossified 'cause i'm so stuck on you with no power in my stilts that they dare walk back to the same old party crowd that streeted us at midnight so why not go on a whoopee because i don't understand what moment or time is it or what era we belong to for the sweet look of you makes me wonder verily that it's not the 21st century and we're stuck somewhere amidst 1920s, aren't we? oh girl, where did we meet? in the middle of modern epoch or somewhere in the jazz age? and are you smiling now for this is what love does to us?
Author's Note
Listening to 'Love' by Lana Del Rey. This is a very special poem. Free verse. It's about a boy who comes across a shy girl at a party and gets an illusion that both of them are part of Jazz age (1920s). He falls in love with her and wants to heal her past wounds. In the process, he loses his identity and the track of time just to realize that this is exactly what love does to us. It makes us forget everything except for the person whom we love. :')❤
I've made use of 1920s vocabulary in the poem to give his illusion a strong touch of reality. Here are the meanings to help you folks. =)
● canceled stamp - a shy girl at a dance or party ● big timer - a charming and romantic man ● blue serge - a sweetheart ● jazz age - (1920s) ● fag - a cigarette ● moonshine - homemade whiskey ● Struggle Buggy - the backseat of a car ● swanky - elegant ● flivver - a Ford Model T ● ten cent boxes - taxi cabs ● Tin Pan Alley - the music industry in New York ● ankle - walk ● on the lam - fleeing from police ● unreal - special ● blooey - the condition when one has gone to pieces ● zozzled - drunk ● carry a torch - have a crush ● live wire - a lively person ● killjoy - a solemn person ● weasel - a young man who steals a girl from her boyfriend ● joe - coffee ● static - empty talk/conflicting opinion ● cash or check - Do we kiss now or later? ● splifficated - drunk ● copacetic - excellent ● java - coffee ● giggle water - booze ● ossified - drunk ● stilts - legs ● streeted - thrown out of a party ● whoopee - wild fun
Now, go read the poem once again. You'll enjoy it when you'll understand it. Do leave your comments about this new try of mine. I'm eager to know what you think of it. I typed all these meanings just to make sure that you do get the point behind this poem. How love makes you nostalgic of a time when you didn't exist even to such an extent that you feel like you are present there. :')