Highest Achievement - #7 in poetry [Oct 3, 2016]
~Nostalgia~
It's delicate, but potent.
The pain from an old wound.
A twinge in your heart..
Far more powerful than memory alone
A feeling of a place
Where we...
Ache
To
Go
Again.
-My thoughts. My word...
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i slept in a paint palette and woke up plastered to an enormous canvas facing the night skyline and all the skyscrapers lit in brilliant city lights
i kept looking at all of it a lucid, wide panorama a bridge over the water the lucent flow of which captured the moonlight in a li'l bottle of heights
i kept wonderin' about it the audience who wants all them endings to look a tad over-dramatic, no? and how they want ends to leave them in awe of it
but what is wrong with a paintin' that's abstract a poem, not so dramatic a night that is dissolved in an uneventful silence 'n' nothin' special at all?
Author's Note
Listening to 'We Think Too Much' by Lil Peep. ❤
I've kinda broken from the neon phase for all of you and written this simple poem. I always try to end my poems with something that captures the readers for a moment and it's not just me. Every writer out there tries their best to keep the ending eventful, something that leaves an imprint on the hearts of their readers. I started writing this poem because I was in a peaceful mood and the calmness of the moment felt divine to me. However, by the end of second stanza, I had no idea how I was going to end it because there was nothing dramatic about the serenity I felt then. So I realized, endings don't have to be eventful always. It's fine to have an ending that has nothing special in it. It's okay to dissolve in the abstract and live in there. :')❤