Highest Achievement - #7 in poetry [Oct 3, 2016]
~Nostalgia~
It's delicate, but potent.
The pain from an old wound.
A twinge in your heart..
Far more powerful than memory alone
A feeling of a place
Where we...
Ache
To
Go
Again.
-My thoughts. My word...
Oops! This image does not follow our content guidelines. To continue publishing, please remove it or upload a different image.
open your eyes, darling can you breathe here? under all this blue water can you take this all in?
no don't be afraid, dear you're not going to die not anymore, sweetheart for you've already died
when? you ask me when? but don't you remember? you died..every moment have you forgotten now?
yeah, it's good to forget all that made you afraid come lets explore it all this subaqueous world!
don't you want to see it? primeval forest, urchins, sea turtles 'n' coral reefs so why don't you get up?
what is it? don't tell me.. oh my god! don't say it! you have fallen for me? but i'm a mermaid, sire!
oh how can you love me? a human can't fall in love with a mermaid like me so please don't say it at all
what? ofcourse yes, sire! you're dead already, yes so what is your logic now that rules aren't for dead?
But sire..don't hush me.. you have to listen to me hey what are you asking come closer, i can't hear
yes! ofcourse, why not? you are breathing here under all this blue water so what do you mean?
oh i guess you are right if you can breathe here 'n' if you're already dead so you can love me too!
for this is not the land where they make rules we're under water, love, beyond the restrictions..
beyond the idea of it all the right and the wrong we're deep in the ocean of love and dreams now
so lets love one another as long as you are here breathing but still dead in the circle of my arms
so lets stay here tonight and make the most of it as long as dream's alive 'n' you're not waking up
Author's Note
I don't like this one at all. Honestly. But the idea is that he's dreaming tonight and the reference to being dead is the death of his soul after heart break. Seeking refuge, his subconscious has thrown him into the realm of water where no rules apply. He's all free. Tonight. As long as he's asleep. :')❤
You can tell me that you don't like it because I have the idea already. :D It's so not like me. :P