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This is a Tiana soulmate story!!!!(Sorry all Glam, Tarella, Dexiana and other people who ship these two with others, not sorry.)
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Soulmates are rare in the Lost Cities. Only one pair come along every one million years.
The pair will only find out they are soulmates when one of their eyes become the colour of their soulmate's eyes.
Though most elves think it's just a legend.
Biana Vacker has heard about the legend about the soulmates, she thinks it's all just a legend, just like many others do, though she doesn't expect it to happen to her.
Tam Song has never heard of the legend of the soulmates, he's too busy caring for his twin to care. But when he sees Biana Vacker for the second time, something sparks in his eye.
Will the two ever know if soulmate do exist? And will they find out if their ever made for each other?
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Two shall come together every million years,
United as one.
One eye the same color as the other,
Unless they realize each other.
But beware, terrible fate awaits one,
something that might affect the other.
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YOUR COVER: (6/10) I like the color scheme used here because it goes well with the title. However, it doesn't do a good job at representing your story. After all, the eye colors might be important, but they're not the only aspects of your story. I suggest experimenting with using photos, filters, and font sizing/presentation and style. Or you could go to a cover designer on Wattpad.
YOUR TITLE: (7/10) I can understand why you chose the title to be Silver Eyes, Teal Eyes, but it only represents one portion of your story. What other titles appeal to you that are more unique and accurately represent most of your story? You can keep it the way it is, but I suggest keeping your mind open to other title possibilities.
