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BLURB:
SIN was known for two things
Outmost chaos and danger.
Anastasia Beverly had a life you couldn't tell just from looking at her, ofcourse extraordinary confidence radiated from her, you could tell she was a woman of power, but what you could never guess was that she was on a mission; TO HUNT AND KILL, but then life throws something or should I say someone unexpectedly her way. And she's stuck between choosing her revenge served on a platter of gold or seeking something she thought she could never have
Life has a funny way of doing things
Imagine falling inlove with your prey?
Bloody hell something unpleasant was bound to happen!
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YOUR COVER: (6/10) While your cover fits the aesthetic and mood your story may go for, it's very cluttered. The title reminds me of a price tag, which would work if it related the plot or triggering action, but in this case, it isn't the way to portray your cover. The title should be easy to see, and the font should represent the story and genre. Overall, the quality did not impress me. However, there are many graphic designers on Wattpad who can help you out, and I have some fantastic cover shops featured in my reading lists. If you're looking for a better cover to represent your story, I suggest checking those out.
YOUR TITLE: (7/10) I appreciate that the title of the story hinted at the story genre and plot. It draws in the right audience for your story. However, especially within the dark romance genre, having "sin" in the title is very common and borders on generic/cliché. You can keep the title as it is, but keep in mind that I've critiqued a few stories with similar titles and plots, and there are probably more out there. If you want your story to stand and be successful, I suggest being open to the possibility of other title ideas.
YOUR BLURB: (2/5) There is a lot of work that needs to be done for your blurb. You have many grammatical errors, including missing punctuation and misspelled words. For example, "of course" is two words, "in love" should be two words, and you need to end sentences with periods. "Outmost" should be "Utmost" and "Sin was known for two things" should end with a period, or it's incomplete. You poorly constructed this blurb. A blurb should be short, concise, and show of your writing capabilities. Your blurb is short, but it is not concise. I suggest carefully planning each sentence structure. Split the huge paragraph into smaller ones so the readability is more clear to readers. If you inspect the large paragraph in your blurb, your first sentence makes up most of it. You have comma splices, and you strung endless clauses together. This makes it hard for your blurb to make sense. If you want to work on clearing up your blurb, I suggest reading thoroughly through the grammar section, because most of the things addressed there applies to your blurb. And when you've cleaned up your blurb to the best it can be, you can incorporate writing skills such as metaphors/similes and descriptive language to draw in potential readers. Keep in mind that if you structure your blurb the same as other stories, it will not gather the attention you'd want.
