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Reasons why Raavi is your average teenage girl-
1)She does not have a personality.
2)She is as basic as a non-snowflake.
3)She is lazy enough to be passed off as a depressed teenage.
4)She has placed an order of a nitrogen cylinder to asphyxiate herself.
5)She wants to be in a John green novel.
Reasons why she SHOULD NOT be anywhere near Saransh,her nemesis and crush (and especially not make any deal with him)-
1)She has a nagging suspicion that he is better than her, as a person and all.
2)He apparently likes to engage with her.
3)He probably would not help her in world domination.
4)He does seem like the person who calls suicidal people, cowards.
5)As beautiful as he is, he is not her John green novel hero.
She has a plan.Some temporary chemical hormonal reactions cannot deter her from achieving her ultimate purpose.
RIGHT!?
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YOUR COVER: (9/10) I appreciate the color scheme used, as it helps the cover look organized and professional. The cover also hints at the genre (from looking at it, I know it's not fantasy or paranormal) so it draws in the appropriate audience for your story. It's simple and clean. The only thing I'd change is the title—it should be easy to read at first glance. Since your title is pretty long, using the same cursive font can look messy on the cover. Instead, I suggest experimenting with different fonts. Perhaps you could use two different fonts to avoid the repetition and experiment with the placement of the title. This is optional, of course, and if you ever decide to change your cover, I have some fabulous cover shops featured in my reading list on my profile for you to check out!
YOUR TITLE: (8/10) Your title is unique and oozes with personality. From first glance, I can sense your humor and fun personality projected in this story. It represents a general theme occurring throughout your story (or from your five chapters, as I can tell). I took off a few points because the title is bordering on too long. A title longer than five words is considered too long, as short titles are easier to remember, and your title is exactly five words long. You can keep it as it is, but if you decide to change it in the future, I'd suggest using a shortened version of it. And, of course, it should still fully represent your story.
