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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
I'm getting so many reviews at the moment so I'm sorry if it takes me a while to get to you and your character. Here is an oc by CrystaltheAquaNinja
My comments will be in bold
Basics and grounding
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That's pretty cool, more likely to create a unique but realistic character by basing them off of real people.
Character information
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This is actually incredibly detailed and well done. I really like that he doesn't look like your stereotypical 'perfect guy'. He has a realistic personality and feels like someone that I could actually meet, if anything you could afford to give him more positive traits. There's not much I have to say here because there's nothing for me to correct. Relationships
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The relationships between the characters seem realistic and understandable. The only tip I can really give here is develop the relationships further so that it's very clear how he functions with the people around him.
Backstory
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This is pretty basic and realistic, about what you'd expect from a character that is so grounded in reality. The only problem I have is why did he avoid Ashton? And why did she leave her house? I understand that you've probably thought this out, but it's not written here so I thought I'd bring it up.
Stats
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I like that there are reasons why he has these stats, but I recommend having at least one lower stat then the rest since most are in the mid to high range of things. I do like the amount of thought put into this though, so we'll done with that.
Final thoughts This character is incredibly well thought out and realistic, meaning there is very little I can actually point out for you to improve upon. So really good job with this character, it's very well done.
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you of course do not have to listen to what I've said. This us all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
