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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
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Alright. All I have to say is be careful making your mains OP, even if the villains are stronger. It's no fun routing for a character who's already strong enough to do as they please.
Character information
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This all works pretty well but be careful when making a God character to do it well, since it can be tricky. All I really suggest here is add more detail, especially to the personality and hobbies.
Relationships
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It's nice seeing more then one love interest at different times, it's realistic since its rare that actual people stay with one person for life.
The only issue I have here is to be careful with having her parents be missing because it's normally done pretty bad. You gotta show the effects of it.
Just be sure to develop these relationships and make sure you show their effects.
Backstory
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Alright I kinda get what you're on about here but I recommend creating a more detailed Backstory for this specific character. Because, you told me about her birth and the start of her journey but nothing in between. Work on her reaction to her parents disappearance and add other key events.
Other
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I know you said characters in this world were OP but this is like OP. The weaknesses do help it but I suggest cutting down some of these powers because even in an op world, this is a lot.
Stats
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Stats are reasonably balanced so it's fine.
Final thoughts Overall, this is a pretty good character but I think you should rethink and flesh out a couple of things, specifically the Backstory aspect because there's not that much there. Apart from that, she's pretty decent.
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
