Here we have an oc for an original universe by puredeparture
My comments will be in bold
Basics and grounding
This sounds really interesting and I commend you for taking inspiration from a real life outbreak. The Flare is also a good thing to follow since James Dashner did an incredible job creating a fictional disease.
Character information
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