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My first batim review, this should be fun. Here is a review for Rainbow_Hippie
My comments will be in bold
Basics and grounding/Character information
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I'm not as well verse in batim as I used to be but I'm trying my best. I like the sound of her design and her personality seems to work. The only issue I have with her is the whole angel/demon thing, because I feel like it should be one or the other? Ik that Alice has the whole devil horn thing, but she is largely represented as an angel. I might be nitpicking there, I'm not sure.
Relationships
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These are fine. Though I can't really see Sammy being the relationship type, but if it's just your character having feelings on him, then I suppose it works.
Backstory
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I don't have any problems here, but I just recommend adding more detail and developing the past more.
Stats
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These stats are fine, I don't have anything to say here.
Final thoughts This character is pretty decent and I quite like the sound of her, but I suggest adding more detail and developing her further.
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
