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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
Another review for an original universe, this time by AuraHeart
My comments will be in bold
Basics and grounding
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Oooooh sounds interesting. Make sure this is well explained if you ever write this piece.
Character information
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I honestly don't have very much to say here because this is pretty well planned out. All I can really say you can add here is you could afford to give him more positive personality traits since his personality seems overwhelmingly negative.
