Foxshade05 wanted me to take a look at their creepypasta oc after they've edited it, so here we go!
My comments will be in bold
Basics and grounding
I see that you've added inspirations to this character, using inspiration can really help a character come into it's own, as long as the traits aren't completely copied.
Character information
(Tomboy isn't really something that should be put in gender as it's more of a personality trait since the character doesn't identify as a boy.)
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