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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
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I like the sound of this character so far, she sounds pretty well balanced and well done. There's nothing here I can tell you to improve really except giving her maybe one more unique hobby, since the ones given are pretty common.
Relationships
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Again, these are all pretty good relationships and seem to be well done. I don't have any problem with oc x canon, but be careful shipping her with Bakugou since he's such a fiery character, it's hard to design someone that will truly work with him.
Backstory
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This is a pretty decent Backstory, all I recommend is adding more detail and adding to it in order to make it better and more foolproof. Other
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This is a very interesting quirk choice, I like the sound of it and it's less common then the dragon one we previously spoke about. Creating weapons is a common quirk, it's even shown in the show through one of the villains. However, I like that there's a spin on this and it's not like every other weapon summoning quirk. So there's nothing wrong with this quirk in my eyes.
Stats
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These stats are good, not too strong, not too weak. I don't have anything to say here.
Final thoughts I really do like this character a lot and it's definitely a large improvement from the last one. This character could be very entertaining and likable. I hope that I get to see more from her in the future. If you ever write a book for this character, hit me up, I'd love to read about her.
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you of course do not have to listen to what I've said. This us all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
