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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
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Alright sounds cool but those names are scarily similar so be careful with that because it's easy for the reader to mix them up.
Character information
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She sounds pretty interesting as far as things go. There's nothing here but I recommend adding to her and developing some point of her personality to really get to know your own character better.
Relationships
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These are fine but they need more development and additions to flesh out the relationship and make sure they develop the character and add to her further.
Backstory
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Okay, this works for the character but just like everything else, I recommend adding more details, especially to her younger years and add some more reasoning for her actions.
Other
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Pretty cool, this works got nothing to say here.
Stats
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These stats are pretty balanced so I don't have anything to add here.
Extra
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Cool little addition here, it makes sense.
Final thoughts I quite like this character, she sounds pretty good for the most part. All I can really think of doing is developing her more and adding more to her in order to make her feel more fleshed out and individual.
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
