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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
Props to you for somehow making the comments aesthetic don't think that's been done before.
My comments will be in bold
Basics and grounding
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That's cool, I've worked off of a lot of old ocs so it's always a good starting point.
Character information
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I love her already. You don't see enough characters with braces and that's nice to see. I really like her design and everything. Her personality is really well thought out too, however I think you can afford to add some more positive traits in order for her to be more balanced and leveled out as a character.
Maybe add some more hobbies but apart from that this is good.
Relationships
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Yes! Oc friends and a healthy relationship with guardian figures! You unfortunately don't see enough of these and I really like this. Maybe you could add some more detail but aort form that this is pretty snazzy.
Backstory
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Okay this works but I'd like some more information of her home life and her interactions with her family and those around her. Just some more development and detail would go a long way here.
Other
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This works well but maybe think of some extra details like what wand she has and what her patronus is.
Stats
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Stats are balanced and make sense, no comments here.
Final thoughts I really like this oc and everything you've put into her is good! All I can really suggest is to add more to her to develop her further and make her even better as a character. But apart from that, really good job.
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
