Review 162 // Briar-Rose

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Here is a review for BriarxWitch

My comments will be in bold

Basics and grounding

It's not very often I review this universe but I know it really well, might be a little rusty though so bare with

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It's not very often I review this universe but I know it really well, might be a little rusty though so bare with.

Character information

Character information

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Alright so the basic concept is pretty decent here but there are a couple of issues

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Alright so the basic concept is pretty decent here but there are a couple of issues. You haven't actually given her a last name since I assume that that is her first name due to the hyphen, so think of one.

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