Review 99 // Jeremias Joseff Claudio

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Here is a review for kriston-

My comments will be in bold

Basics and grounding

Alright, I see a lot of ocs with no set universe and I'm cool with it, just make sure that it still works and flows correctly

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Alright, I see a lot of ocs with no set universe and I'm cool with it, just make sure that it still works and flows correctly.

Character information

Character information

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This is pretty well done and I'm impressed with the detail put into his design

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This is pretty well done and I'm impressed with the detail put into his design. I also like the sound of his personality but be careful it doesn't contradict itself, especially with the sweet but cold thing. It can work if he's cold at first and then becomes sweet but otherwise that doesn't quite work.

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