Here is a review for kriston-
My comments will be in bold
Basics and grounding
Alright, I see a lot of ocs with no set universe and I'm cool with it, just make sure that it still works and flows correctly.
Character information
This is pretty well done and I'm impressed with the detail put into his design. I also like the sound of his personality but be careful it doesn't contradict itself, especially with the sweet but cold thing. It can work if he's cold at first and then becomes sweet but otherwise that doesn't quite work.
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