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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
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Sounds cool.
Character information
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I like the whole aesthetic of this character, she sounds cute. I only have a couple of issues here. Does she have a last name? I'm not quite sure how naming works in Korea so if it's a cultural thing then just ignore this point, but I recommend giving her a last name since she's a normal human being. Also maybe add some more to her personality because it feels like there's potential for more and it just isn't quite there yet.
Relationships
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These sound like pretty realistic and well thought out relationships. Just make sure that they have an effect on the character and help her develop.
Backstory
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The relationships bit actually told me more about her past then this bit did. Add some more information and key events here so that she can feel more real and developed.
Also be careful with a character being bullied, it's pretty common and not always executed very well.
Stats
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Stats are pretty well balanced so it's all good.
Final thoughts Overall she sounds like a pretty good character but I think you need to add more detail and develop her further to make her feel more fleshed out and realistic.
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
