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Alright I've said my comments on this before but I would like to take this moment to say that I can't remember every character that I'm given and it's hard to find a specific one due to the amount of characters I've looked at. So, in future could you just write out the universe again instead of me having to go search for it in my past reviews.
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I like her description, it's well done and thought out but maybe add small details like body type and such.
Now, my only actual issue here is how you're handling DID, whilst it is obvious to fit the plot and everything, having only one alter that is murderous and evil is not only misrepresentation of the disorder but also kinda cliché. Whenever handling any mental disorder you need to do a lot of research and understand what you're working with, especially when working with one as rare and unpredictable as this one. You have to be able to realistically portray it in a way that just isn't for your plot.
As far as the personalitys goes, I think add some more negative traits to Alex's and more positive ones to AC.
