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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
Also I'm sorry about the name in the title my phone won't let me use accents on letters.
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Basics and grounding
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That's fine.
Character information
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Most of this is fine and I'm commented in this character before. I do, however, have an issue with her personality. It feals like she doesn't have any actual negative traits towards others, like she's not annoying or loud or anything like that. The only negative triat she has is towards herself even though she doesn't have much reason to. Of course, she's traumatised but the trauma has to show at some point. Something like that happening would lead to her being down, even if she hides it. Hiding symptoms but still having the damage can sometimes be seen as an easy way out. You should look into mental disorders from trauma, like PTSD or depression caused by events.
