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Alright you haven't given me any universe grounding here so I'm not quite sure how any of this actually works. I assume it's an original universe due to the angels and demons concept even though it's pretty common. Come up with some basic universe rules and descriptions and that will help you build the characters around it.
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This is descriptive and well detailed so good job on that. There are really only a couple of issues I have here. You have to be careful that you don't put too much into one character. This is most clear with her being both an angel and a demon. Her name doesn't sound exactly realistic, but if everyone in this world has similar names then it's fine. Try to be careful having an. Appearence that changes because if not handled correctly to give the impact it needs, it can come across as Marysuish. Add more negative traits to her personality because it seems overwhelmingly positive and whilst you've attempted to add a bad point, vulnerability isn't exactly something people see as a bad thing, so please think about that.
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