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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
A character for an original universe by Sepulchre13
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Basics and grounding
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This sounds pretty interesting
Character information
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This character seems interesting, all I can really recommend is add more detail, like adding more positive personality traits and more hobbies to really add to the character and develop her further.
