Here is a review for SmallLittleNobody
My comments will be in bold
Basics and grounding
Character information
For the most part this is okay, the only issue I have is the part time lord thing but I will go into detail on that later. I think you could add some more negative traits to her personality and also make sure none of her traits contradict, for example being outspoken but being more of a listener don't go together.
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