The Blood Of My Moon

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Author: Cakeo-San

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Author: Cakeo-San

Reviewer: chemicalkrackel

The Blood Of My Moon

Cover: 0/10

let's be true, I DON'T LIKE IT. It fools people into thinking that the book isn't a good read. it fools people into thinking it's some dull cliche with taehyung and jungkook, it appears like that.
to me, it looked like some dull aesthetic that made me squint my eyes in displeasure and the moment I read the first chapter I knew that the cover does no justice to the writing.
the cover looks like some random edit and sorry but to me, it doesn't look like some good read, it isn't an attractive one, a cover should be like a clickbait because truth be told covers attract people, people DO judge a book by the cover so change it because it is a hole in your work.

Title: 1/5

let me tell you my opinion, IF I wasn't impressed with the aura of the book then definitely I wouldn't be giving you that 1 mark, I am not a fan of such long names the truth is they aren't seemingly good and marking but your book name imprinted on my mind, idk it's about the placement or something but the title makes me feel pulled but still at the same time I would love to ask you to make it shorter by choosing up small yet aesthetic words that'll leave a deep impression on the person's mind

Synopsis: 10/10

now the real deal starts and wait before that (i am going to advise the reader to swipe away if you think some IMMATURE can curse because I AM going to curse a lot here because someone told me I am immature because I curse a lot so let this immature person review your mature book )

It's fucking interesting, confuckinglatulations for winning my interest with the suspense thriller account of words you have used, I don't read taekook books I am being clear, this was the first book I read were taekook was a lead, so it was a new thing to me not like I haven't read some bxb or gxg books but because they weren't a taekook fic, so as I started reading the description I was impressed by the vibe of assassins it gave me but here's an advice, don't use other fonts for the books in wp because some phones are fucked up and they fucking can't see those fonts so yeah it'll be for your betterment

Plot: 30/30

it's uncommon for me to give a whole 30 for a plot but I ain't holding back because I am impressed, most importantly I loved the usage of the song fly me to the moon its one of my favorites, and coincidence it is that I was listening to it while reviewing your book, that song gives me so many feelings with different crafting sceneries and your story did the same, the dying jjk in the first chapter to the humming kth , it was all charismatically plotted and I fell in fucking love with it.
It's not like I am some fucking idiot who doesn't know a sense of it but I am some insanely sane person who knows reviewing books and your book has that fucking pull and it's beautiful

Character: 10/10

interesting, fucking interesting, non-cringe, non-boring, fucking dwelled into those drapes of perfectionised writing , your characters were all, they had sense. And I am a patron of sensible characters so when I started reading I was in fucking awe of it like what the fuckery is this because of the characters they had imperfections and yet they were perfect, flaws were all hidden, it felt like some magical orchestral imprints.

Grammar: 25/25

bad grammar is the last thing I'll wish upon from a reviewer and yet you impressed me, it's rare you know it's hard finding books with those perfect twinges that have awestruck words and love the sickened style and your book had them, the words, the sentence, the devices used, it all was implied and beauty reflected in them like the raw shadows of the moon on water.

Writing style: 10/10

I'll be an idiot to deduct marks in this field, it's so fucking good, the way you stroked those words with polish and how you left the reader in bizarre feels make me happy, the English used to everything, it's beautiful and ironically leaves me bitter with the fact that the book has only 1k or something reads.

Overall

Impressively confined writing that I would love to see in print, what a deluge will that be to see it in hardcopy in before my eyes and a cup of caffeine to let me through the night. Your book made love feel wrong at the moment where the night only had me and my lover in an embrace. 

Review Scores: 86/100

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