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Vampire's Secret

Writer :: taesthetic

Reviewer :: chemicalkrackel

Title :: Vampire's Secret

Cover ::

I like the way you emphasized the theme of the reckoning meet of dawn and dusk with the imaginary of the fall and rise of an evil entity as it exclaims a lot about the nature of what the book should be but what wasn't right is the typography, it could've been more appealing by settling up the opacity and size of the subtitles that wouldn't steal the show.

Title ::

Cliché and common? Yes, interesting? No, nothing that would spark interest in me as it's like a backward immune integration of an overly used word that fails to stamp a name. I wish you to add something that would be out of the blue and interestingly attractive, to say the least.

Synopsis ::

It doesn't have anything that I'd use as to pronounce as a synopsis, the book doesn't own any stabilization of interest, it's like a meek segment of work written with a lot of many spaces. I would enjoy the fact if you remove all those unnecessary additional places as they only bore the reader out instead of adding sprinting interest.

Plot ::

A lot has been going haywire here, the plot isn't aligned to the story as it manipulates the wrong instinctive of the story idea, not in any way matching up with the applied scheme. Work on it, write it and revise it, that's the most valued advice I'd give in hopes to save the plot's already drowned ship.

Characters ::

Nothing about it is what I would call planned or intriguing, the bland addition of obsessive madness that institutes that the male lead is hilariously obvious about his existing reality and also about how dumb the female lead can be. It needs the Cinderella touch of sparkle that would make it shiny and glistening.

Grammar ::

Sorry to break it to you but what you have implied here is heavily toxic in nature and doesn't integrate anything that I'd rate and readable, please recheck and get it to confirm read from someone.

Writing Style ::

It needs changes to come off the curse of the implications it is now because it seems as a trailing manifestation of miscalculation and sinned wordings, please pay attention to what you write and what you serve.

Overall ::
Please follow up the mentioned things above if you are in any hopes of getting somewhere with your book or else I am no one to help expect some bitch people cuss out after I criticize the word served over my plate of luxurious delicacy.

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